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 <section class="content center" id="about">
     <h2>hello, creature. <a href="#about"><i class="nf nf-oct-link"></i></a></h2>
     <p>
-          my name is <span class="glitch">nelle</span> (not Nelle, nelle), some call me <span class="glitch">[data expunged]</span>. 
+        my name is <span class="glitch">nelle</span> (not Nelle, nelle), some call me <span class="glitch">[data expunged]</span>.
       <br>
-          my pronouns are <span class="glitch"><plain>[she/her] ** [they/them]</plain></span>, see my <a href="https://pronouns.cc/@LimePotato">pronouns.cc page</a>.
+        my pronouns are <span class="glitch"><plain>[she/her] ** [they/them]</plain></span>, see my <a href="https://pronouns.cc/@LimePotato">pronouns.cc page</a>.
       <br /><br>
-          i am a 20-something year old girl-thingamabob, <span class="glitch">[data expunged]</span>, who lives solely and entirely on the internet.
+        i am a 20-something year old girl-adjacent, <span class="glitch">[data expunged]</span>, of the world and on the internet.
       <br>
       <br>
-          i like putting computers together and fixing them, i do linux sysadmin, sometimes i dabble in kotlin/java (usually minecraft mods), i love space and the science adventure series!!!!!
+        i like fixing/messing around with computers, linux sysadmin, occasionally i do the kotlin/java usually for minecraft modding, big fan of the science adventure series.
       <br>
       <br>
-          i host various services, mostly for myself and my friends. All of which can be found at <a href="https://ouroboros.group/">the uptime kuma page</a>. 
-          among the things i host are a few fediverse instances 
-          <a href="https://ouroboros.gay/">ouroboros.gay</a>, <a href="https://limbo.town">limbo.town</a>, <a href="https://1.048596.observer">1.048596.observer</a>.
-          i also host my own <a href="https://git.nullafati.xyz/">git forge</a>, <a href="https://vid.ouroboros.group">invidious instance</a> and searxng instance, among various other things.
-          i really like the process of sysadmin, and i like hosting my own services/owning my own data/moderating social media my way.
+        i host various services, mostly for myself and my friends. All of which can be found at <a href="https://ouroboros.group/">the uptime kuma page</a>.
+        among the things i host are a few fediverse instances
+        <a href="https://ouroboros.gay/">ouroboros.gay</a>, <a href="https://limbo.town">limbo.town</a>, <a href="https://1.048596.observer">1.048596.observer</a>.
+        i also host my own <a href="https://git.nullafati.xyz/">git forge</a>, and searxng instance, among various other things.
+        i enjoy the process of spinning up and hosting software, dunno why.
       <br>
       <br>
-          i dont have many projects that are ongoing <i>and</i> ready to show to the public, but i have made a few minecraft mods. all of which can be seen on my
-          <a href="https://modrinth.com/user/limepotato">modrinth page</a>, my two current (admittedly small) public mods are
-          <a href="https://modrinth.com/mod/edible-blocks">Edible Blocks</a> and <a href="https://modrinth.com/mod/roses-quilt">Roses</a>.
+        i dont have many projects that are ongoing <i>and</i> ready to show to the public, but i have made a few minecraft mods. all of which can be seen on my
+        <a href="https://modrinth.com/user/limepotato">modrinth page</a>, my two current (admittedly small) public mods are
+        <a href="https://modrinth.com/mod/edible-blocks">Edible Blocks</a> and <a href="https://modrinth.com/mod/roses-quilt">Roses</a>.
       <br>
       <br>
-      i will put more stuff here eventually.
-      <br>
-      :3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3:3
+      i will put more stuff here eventually. maybe.
     </p>
   </section>
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